I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Guys.
Today in CIP we were shown a message by Anto lienert-Brown.
In this video, he is saying thank you for sending them some good luck message.
Here is his video
This was really cool and we are all very happy with the response.
Morning Tobey, Vin here Great job on explaining what we had to do, also good work on finding the video, it was sort of hard to find. Your Intro to what we have been doing is good but very short, try to expand on it in the future.
Hi Tobey, My name is Tai and i'm from Hornby High School, I really like this blog post I most like how you added in the video and you said you were very happy that you got this response but maybe next time you could add in some more writing in explaining what you had to do to get this response but over than that great blog post and keep the good work up.
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Morning Tobey, Vin here
ReplyDeleteGreat job on explaining what we had to do, also good work on finding the video, it was sort of hard to find. Your Intro to what we have been doing is good but very short, try to expand on it in the future.
Bye!
Hi Tobey, My name is Tai and i'm from Hornby High School, I really like this blog post I most like how you added in the video and you said you were very happy that you got this response but maybe next time you could add in some more writing in explaining what you had to do to get this response but over than that great blog post and keep the good work up.
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