Today we were looking at our progress in writing.
Mine has such big improvement here is what it looked like a while ago:
With this writing I didn't make sure it made sense.
Now it's time for my improvement:
I can see that I improved my vocabulary and now can write lot more now.
Anyway that's it from me!
BYE!
i like your holidays it is cool and well done for winning and keep it up good job by bailey.
ReplyDeleteola Tobey
ReplyDeleteI like how you shared what you did in your holidays.
I also like the hunt for the wild people
bye for now
Bola Tobey it is Nirvana from Rata class
ReplyDeleteI like your holiday I wish I could have one like that. BYE
Hi Tobey, this is a good post but in the book I can't see the writing and I really want to read it, anyways good work, Bye.
ReplyDeleteFrom Mikayla K.
Hey Tobey! Sounds like a fun holiday! Was the movie cool? What was your favorite part in the movie?
ReplyDeleteBlog you later!
Kia ora Tobey!
ReplyDeleteAshrita here!
Wow, you really improved over the years! I really like how you added character to your writing now.
Maybe next time you could find a better place to take your picture.
Hello Tobey Sita here...
ReplyDeleteGood job on improving in you writing you getting there! I like how you added a picture of your work to show us what you have been writing. I also like how added how you improved aswell. I have a question... is there anything else that you need improvment of and if so reply back and say.
Thats all for now... BYEEEE!!
Thats all for now.. BYEEE!!
DeleteKia ora Tobey.
ReplyDeleteI love how you have reflected on your writing progress and how you recognised that your vocabulary has improved.
I can't wait to see more and more of your writing and your impressive vocabulary.
Ka pai!!