I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Tobey, Aryan here checking out your blog! Your cinquain is really good! Next time could you tell us how you came up with these ideas? Anyways, awesome blog post blog ya later!
Hi Toby It's Siyona here in Rimu class the same class as you your cinquain is so intrusting you reminded me how winter was so shivring cold winter days well blog you later .
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wow! this is amazing! i have never seen anything like this. this insporates me to be a writter like you
ReplyDeleteHi it is Angus and I like how you chquainfor the winter and I like winter to blog you later!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111
ReplyDeletegood job
ReplyDeleteHey Tobey, Aryan here checking out your blog!
ReplyDeleteYour cinquain is really good!
Next time could you tell us how you came up with these ideas?
Anyways, awesome blog post blog ya later!
Hi Tobey this is Sonny here I love this poem you really are a amazing writer.
ReplyDeleteHey Tobey
ReplyDeleteI think that this is great discption and wow words so mabey next time you could cange that font or make it bigger .
Bye
Hi Toby
ReplyDeleteIt's Siyona here in Rimu class the same class as you your cinquain is so intrusting you reminded me how winter was so shivring cold winter days well blog you later .