Do you think all fruit should be eaten during break time only?
I think fruit should be eaten in break.
Most green,red and orange fruit is normally full of juice.
Some people say fruit is full of vitamins.
But some fruit is full of sugar.
When people eat oranges it usually drips down there throat.
I was walking to my class and I saw too much fruit not eaten.
Fruit is healthy for you.
Often fruit is hard to came by.
This is why I think all fruit should be eaten at class time.
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ReplyDeleteHI Tobey im with you I agree to only eat fruit in class time.
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