My writing inprovement

Hi guys im back!
Today we were looking at our progress in writing.
Mine has such big improvement here is what it looked like a while ago:

With this writing I didn't make sure it made sense.

Now it's time for my improvement:

I can see that I improved my vocabulary and now can write lot more now.

Anyway that's it from me!

BYE!

Winter Cinquain

A few days ago we made cinquains and it was really fun here is mine:

I really liked making them and thought the one I made was great.

That's it for now BYE!

BYE!

Prototec

Hi guys
Today we were using Prototec for our basic fact. I did stage 7 and got 30 of the 40 questions correct here is my scores:

I need to improve on my square routes and my percentages.

Next time in class I will practise more on stage 7.

That it from me bye!

BYE!