Port hills fire
My purpose is to entertain you.
Hi guys today I am going to tell you about the port hill fire:
The fire when it started
The port hills now
Port hill fire!
I was playing with my friend on his trampoline when I saw smoke. I went inside and told my mum she said it was from the port hills.
I was scared and my friend was too. I told him it was coming from the port hills and he ran inside I stayed outside for a bit longer. When I came back in my sister wanted to see it so I showed them where it was. But when I went to bed my mum told me another fire has started and that the have both connected together
A few weeks later the fire was out and a lot of houses were burnt down when they went back to them. Everyone back in there houses and their lives are back to normal.
Hope you like my post and tell me if I have missed anything or if I can make it more entertaining in the comments down bellow.
BYE!
Hi Tobey, you explained what happened with your friend well. It was quite scary not knowing where the smoke was coming from or how far away it was.
ReplyDeleteYou could check that you have used the right 'their/there/they're' each time.
Good writing Tobey
Hi my name is Ayla and i live in Auckland. I go to Pt England school and i am a year 6. I rely like your writing because it has interesting words but remember to check your writing but keep up the great work. Bye
ReplyDeleteHi tobey my name is tevarihi i go to ptengland school.I am 10 year old and am a year 6.I like your photos and story. Bye!
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