Inspired Writing Sentence

Hi Guys
Lately, in class, we have been learning about correct sentences and more advanced writing.

Here is my work:

1. Write a simple sentence that describes something about the picture.
2. Add adjectives to the simple sentence, to add more detail.
3. Add more language features like similes or metaphors to enhance the sentence.
4. Use topic words directly related to the picture.
5. Use emotive language to create/clarify mood.
6. Paint a clear picture in the mind of my readers and give the reader detailed and specific information.

1.  The guy stood on the cliff.
2. The tall man stood on the beautiful cliff.
3. The tall man stood on top of the beautiful cliff surrounded by great big mountains like a massive giant and a reflective river that looked like a mirror.
4. The tall man stood posing on top of the beautiful sunny cliff surrounded by great big rocky mountains like a massive giant and a reflective and light river that looked like a mirror.
5. The brave tall man stood posing on top of the beautiful spiky sunny cliff surrounded by great big rocky mountains like a massive giant and a reflective and light river that looked like a mirror.

The brave tall man named Kevin stood posing on top of the beautiful spiky sunny Utah cliff surrounded by great big rocky mountains as big as a massive giant. A bright reflective river that looked like a mirror meander through the valley.

It was really fun and cool to make I really enjoyed this task and I can't wait to find out what we are doing next week.

BYE!