I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
A few weeks ago we went to Culverden. It was really cool and hot so we got a ice-cream. It was really good and refreshing. We play at the park and took pictures. Here are the pictures:
This is us after getting out of the car.
This is a picture of me eating my ice-cream in the park yum!
We had a lot of fun and I hope you have had a lot of fum reading it.
Hey Tobey it TJ here nice to see you I hope that was fun it look like you were having fun a lot a fun I wish if I was there with you. It look super fun and cool I hope you have a good day bye.
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Hey Tobey Aryan here!
ReplyDeleteI can see how fun it was I wish I could be there!
Some spelling mistakes but not many!
Anyways amazing blog post!
Hey Tobey it TJ here nice to see you I hope that was fun it look like you were having fun a lot a fun I wish if I was there with you. It look super fun and cool I hope you have a good day bye.
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