I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Tobey Tamani Here I really like how you did collaborative work with vin and nathan maybe next time you could put more detail of what you did out on the basketball court. Anyway nice post see you later. :)
Hello Tobey I really liked how you put the scores and a video. I found the video very funny because of the raging and the editing. Maybe next time you could not scream to loud in the video it hurt me ears XD anyway good post Byee
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Hi Tobey Tamani Here
ReplyDeleteI really like how you did collaborative work with vin and nathan maybe next time you could put more detail of what you did out on the basketball court.
Anyway nice post see you later. :)
Hello Tobey I really liked how you put the scores and a video. I found the video very funny because of the raging and the editing. Maybe next time you could not scream to loud in the video it hurt me ears XD anyway good post Byee
ReplyDeleteHello Tobey I love how you like maths and maybe next time spell maths right next time but your video was ok so that's all for now..
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